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Fat Biscuit Angel Baby's avatar

Thank you. I hate looking at the darkness. But I know I have to.

Barbara Courtney's avatar

I recently finished reading "Liliana's Invincible Summer" by Cristina Rivera Garza so the issue of femicide is at the front of my waking thoughts. Thank you for naming the thing that is so hard to look at and so important to see.

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Beautiful, Thank you Barbara.

Shari's avatar

Mirabai…. if your poems become a book they will burn the paper….

This is a story you needed to tell us all!

Thank you!

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Shari.

Susan Catherine's avatar

may we share in holding... it is too much to bear

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Susan.

Casey Bottono's avatar

Thank you, dear Mirabai.

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Casey.

James Navé's avatar

I clicked “like” when I finished reading your poem because it’s fierce and understands that our eyes break light, shield light, turn away from light’s harsh fucking dead-land glare.

And yet, the poem knows that no matter how much we want to turn away, when death takes someone we love, how can we?

Fifteen years ago, on a Sunday afternoon, I walked with a poet named Michelle across the bridge to Ciudad Juarez. We ate burgers and sipped beer. Michelle told me about the women who had disappeared.

It was an ordinary afternoon — children laughed, we ate and talked, a street band played nearby, dogs milled around, nothing much to report.

“Even the dreadful martyrdom must run its course

Anyhow in a corner, some untidy spot

Where the dogs go on with their doggy life and the torturer's horse

Scratches its innocent behind on a tree.” — Auden

It takes a hell of a lot of literary experience and spiritual awareness to write about broken light, the stuff of monsters that haunts us all. But for the grace of God, there go I.

Well done. Well done.

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Nave, for taking the time to offer such substantial praise.

Barbara Schutt's avatar

Oh, my heart aches for you, dear Mirabai! I cannot imagine the nightmare. May the violence end!

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Barbara. May the violence end, indeed.

Amy Hall's avatar

The argument I was having with my daughter seems infinitesimally small and ridiculous now. This puts everything in perspective.

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Amy.

Jeanne v Robertson's avatar

Beyond words. I would die, unable to carry this.

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Jeanne.

Alexandra Eldridge's avatar

Unbearable.

Mirabai Starr's avatar

Thank you, Alexandra.

Jillian's avatar

Heart-struck. Thanks for sharing. And sharing the grief. We are here for you and the memory of your precious daughter.

Eunice Dunlap's avatar

What a nightmare.😔

Yamuna Flaherty's avatar

This was so incredibly moving.

STUART SCADRON-WATTLES's avatar

Debemos llorarle. Debemos orar.

Sally Avison's avatar

Dear Mirabai, the raw brutality of your poem moves me deeply- as you say no mother should ever have to do what you’ve done & you should not have had to do that on your own. As I think of it, let myself feel it my tears flow for you & Lucia. I can’t imagine the depth of your pain. Earlier today I read that young men are luring women on dates where they are unleashing terrible acts of violence as vigilantes on women they see as predators. This is happening here in my sleepy little city at the bottom of the world and did not make it into our mainstream news- how can things possibly change if they are hidden from plain sight?

May divine light illuminate the darkness & in time May you have peace in your heart.

Dejanos cargate en tu dolor, nunca estas sola ❤️